I looked at the thumbnail and opened up.
Luckily I was able to enlarge again and the screen was filled by the two figures - a lot of the original being hidden.
At this stage I thought it was a super photo concentrating more on the figures - have you tried an all round crop?
The moving figure placed so well and the left leg forward rather than the right makes this photo - a couple of seconds before or after and the situation wouldn't have been worth a photograph.
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I think you did pretty well whatever, and I like it.
rigby